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Activities +I Like

There are different activities that I like. They are<--include sportNUM (number), dancing, reading. All these activities develop personality. They bring +a new and active life. Sport gives me health and +a nice body. Dancing brings me pleasure and also it influences on the appearance of my body. Reading give me knowledge and it develops my speech. But one of my favorite<--spelling activities is traveling<--spelling.

As to me, all people like traveling. Even if some people tell<--say that they don't, I wont believe them. Different people have different reasons why they don't travel often or at all. If they don't travel, it means that maybe they don't have money, or time, or organizational skills. But if people traveled somewhere at least one time, in the future they can't help themselves to stop.

 Travelling is my life. I can't live without it. I need to go somewhere at least once a year. If I go to foreign country as a tourist, I will be full of energy and impressions during the rest of the year. I am getting excited not only during the trip but also during the planning of this trip. I can go to the trip with my husband, with my friends or even alone, with the tourist group of unknown people to me. I am not afraid of traveling by myself. I am happy in all cases.

I've been to different countries, such as Poland, France, Hungary, Czech Republic, Russia, Austria, Switzerland, Mexico, Cuba, Greece, Croatia, Montenegro and Bulgaria. I've been in Canada for 2.5 years and I had time to visit lots of places such as Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto, Niagara Falls, Vancouver, Victoria Island, Calgary and Edmonton. When I lived in Ukraine, I tried to organize my friends for the trip even for the weekend. We often traveled to Crimea, the Carpathian Mountains, Kiev and Lviv. We could go for a couple days to Crimea. We could spend only one night there and come back by train on Monday and go straight to work from the train station. We were crazy and tried to catch all the emotions and spend our time in the best way.

My dream is to go to China, Thailand, Australia and India. These are very exotic countries. The culture of these countries differ from those of other countries. Nature is also different. They all have a long history. But I will have to save money for these trips as traveling from Canada to these countries is an expensive pleasure.

 Travelling gives people knowledge, a wider imagination of the world, and new friends. I would advise people if they have some money, it's much better to spend it on trips rather than on a boat, one more jacket, or to visit hundredth time of your favorite restaurant. They would get more emotions and maybe spend less money. But for sure they will get much more staying at home during wedding, New Year, winter vacation.<--meaning?

Take your time and enjoy the world.

Activities

     There are different activities that I like. They are sport, dancing, reading. All these activities develop personality. They bring new and active life. Sport gives me health and nice body. Dancing brings me pleasure and also it influences on the appearance of my body. Reading give me knowledge and it develops my speech. But one of my favorite activities is traveling.

   

      As to me, all people like traveling. Even if some people tell that they don't, I wont believe them. Different people have different reasons why they don't travel often or at all. If they don't travel, it means that maybe they don't have money, or time, or organizational skills. But if people traveled somewhere at least one time, in the future they can't help themselves to stop.

     Traveling is my life. I can't live without it. I need at least to go somewhere one time per year. If I go to foreign country as a tourist, I will be full of energy and impressions during the whole year. I am getting excited not only during the trip but also during the planning of this trip. I can go to the trip with my husband, with my friends and even alone, with the tourist group of unknown people to me. I am not afraid of traveling by myself. I am happy in all cases.

     I've been to different countries such as Poland, France, Hungary, Czech Republic, Russia, Austria, Switzerland, Mexico, Cuba, Greece, Croatia, Montenegro, Bulgaria and others. I've been to Canada for 2.5 years and I had time to visit lots of places such as Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto, Niagara Falls, Vancouver, Victoria Island, Calgary, Edmonton. When I lived in Ukraine, I tried to organize my friends for the trip even for the weekend. We often traveled to Crimea, Carpathian Mountains, Kiev, Lviv. We could go for couple days to Crimea. We could spend there only one night and come back by train on Monday and without getting home we went to work from train. We were crazy and tried to catch all emotions and spend our time in the best way.

     My dream is to go to China, Thailand, Australia and India. These are very exotic countries. The culture of these countries differ from other countries. Nature is also different. They all have a huge history. But I will have to save money for these trips as traveling from Canada to these countries is an expensive pleasure.

     Traveling gives people knowledge, wider imagination of the world, new friends. I could advise to other people if they have some money, it's much better to spend it on trips rather than on boat, one more jacket, to visit hundredth time of your favorite restaurant. You would get more emotions and maybe spend less money. But for sure you will get much more than you can staying at home during wedding, New Year, winter vacation.

      Take your time and enjoy the world.